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Mine and Victinishine97's Fan Fiction
12-25-2011, 04:05 AM
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RE: Mine and Victinishine97's Fan Fiction
A few spelling errors here and there. It was good, but if you spent mor time developing the characters and the story it would be more enjoyable. Not to mention when the whole chapter's put into one giant lump it makes it difficult to read sometimes.
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RE: Mine and Victinishine97's Fan Fiction - Username - 12-25-2011 04:05 AM

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